Matthew Patel (http://mpatelrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/)
I saw Matt writing and he was very focus on it! I cannot really read his paper but I am sure he did a great job!!
Felicitas Ruiz (http://fruizrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/)
Even if the time was short, Feli just aced this essay. She has her prewrite very neat and organized. Her essay has enough examples and quotes! Muy bien :)
Valerie Gonzalez (http://vgonzalezrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/)
Valerie and I got 'phinxed' by Isaiah. I was in panic for a long time but Valerie knew what to write right away. I was jealous!! I think she wrote about " Great Expectations" and I remember that she was very focused.
Megan Hardisty (http://mhardistyrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/)
Her pre-write looks great! It is very organized and I see that she knows what she is writing about. Also her actual essay looks good too. I like her hook!
Hayden Robel (http://hrobelrhsenglitcomp.blogspot.com/)
Woah, I am sorry but I cannot read his essay... But his pre-write looks good. I usually use bubble diagram too. And his essay.... I am sure it is great too! Maybe work on your writing next time haha
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